| Something Wicked This Way Comes By Ray Bradbury 215 pages |
At some point, I will read something not written by Bradbury, but I read F451, then short stories and part of Now and Forever during NaNoWriMo. Kaleidoscope is my new favorite short. And I wpuld like to read his writers guide soon. But, you see, his style is inspiring, and though I could never hope to achieve anything as great as his prose, I do find I write more poetically when I have been reading his stories.
What's it about?
Something Wicked This Way Comes begins with two boys, Will Halloway and Jim Nightshade, one light, one dark. When a circus train arrives at 3 am, the hour when the soul ebbs, Jim and Will find themselves tangled in a sideshow of freaks. One of the two owners demonstrates the magic carousel. Ride it forward, you age. Backwards, you youthen.
When something in the aging process goes wrong, the other owner, Mr. Dark the illustrated man is out hunting the two boys. Just when they think there is no one in town who will ever believe them, Will's father, the library janitor, turns up, making Will realize how little he ever knew of this man he's live with for 13 years.
Any good?
As always, Bradbury's sentences are magnificent. From the first sentence, "First of all, it was October, a rare month for boys," I knew this would be good.
Bradbury spends the first half of the novel reiterating how opposite the boys are. I kept thinking "Okay, we get it!" But each time he stated it, it was different and more beautiful than the last, so I didn't mind.
The second half was intense and emotional. There were the threats of the freaks, but moreso, the threat toward the kids' parents, which transports the reader back to childhood sobbing.
The book is about two things: aging and father/son relationship. The boys want to be older while the father wants to be younger. The worst blow he gets is when the witch calls him old. Bradbury taps into chilhood expertly, like in many of his stories. I can't remember what it was like to be a kid half as well as he does. It's almost like he lived a more special and longer childhood than anyone else to be able to write about it this well. EDIT: In his writing book, I read that he has what I can only assume is some kind of photographic memory because he remembers being a baby, being born, etc. No wonder he can write children so well. He has a magic brain. I want a magic brain.
It was also great to see that the adults were not Charlie Brown adults. The father is just as human and vulnerable as the children, but he ultimately saves the day, making him a hero in Will's eyes when he'd only been a silent janitor who lived in his house before.
The main villian is the illustrated man, who seems to be a completely different man than the one from Bradbury's "The Illustrated Man." He was a scary fellow, sort of classic scary with the addition of tattoos that worked as voodoo dolls. This is a very classic story, after all. It is good vs evil. Terror against laughter.
To sum, through magnificient prose and edge-of-your seat action and poignant reflections on age, it was a two thumbs up novel.
J
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( CLICK HERE to read CH. 8 )
- Location:last day at A.B.
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crazy - Music:Seaside (The Kooks)
What do you think about the title Pulp? Hmm, not really sure. Pulp Fiction is already taken.
Suggestions are welcome.
I'll upload the last 2 chapters next time I'm online. It all comes together rather clumsily, but I was writing so darn fast. Perhaps I will muse on the pros and cons of nanowrimo later.
Thanks for tuning in.
For example, I woke up this morning to find I had scribbled a full page of a dream in the notebook beside my bed. I vaguely remember waking up and thinking That's a brilliant idea! But I don't remember the dream at all. Sometimes I get dreams like the one that became the first scene in Riff. Sometimes I get dreams like last night's which apparently contained the following:
"There is a red (illegible) of fish that excretes harmful gasses. Have to evacuate the building each time this happens."
And
"Special bracelet evil forces from the nightmares always tugging at her possess her. One possession gets her to fling off the bracelet."
I smell a Blockbuster, don't you?
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It's only 11:00, but I'm giving up for the night because I'm writing nonsense and I'm full of turkey and sleep.
Things that I've been doing instead of writing this week:
-Christmas shopping
-Thanksgiving meal
-watching a ton of "Black Books" on YouTube.
J
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Enjoy.
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Chapter 5
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I have succeeded in this week's goal of 28,000 words. I'm in the middle of writing chapter 5. I'll post chpater 4 here, but I warn you, I haven't proof read this one, so there's going to be even more errors than usual.
One of my original ideas was to have a book on Thoreau, but it would take too much research for a month-book, so I decided against it. Sneaky little bugger worked himself back into the story and in no small way! But what better a person to read about in a book like this?
I went to the library to pick up a copy of Walden because I needed some quote and I accidentally found The Count of Monty Cristo. Over 1300 pages!!! That won't do. I'm going to have to pick a different book for the first chapter.
Things are happening spontaneously in this book, as they should. Thoreau, for example. Also, in this chapter, what Tian finds in the bins in Basil's house is something that I discovered literally as I was putting the words on the page. Who needs outlines, really? And yes, Basil has a pet rat. It's not a Fawlty Towers reference, although it's probably subconscious.
( CLICK HERE to read CHAPTER 4 )
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CHAPTER 3
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End of week 1
Goal: 14000 words
Actual: 14985
2 chapters complete
Whoo!
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( CLICK HERE to read CH. 1 )
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So why did the first drafts suck? I'm going to call it If You're Copying Bradbury's Style (pathetically, may I add) Then Write In 3rd Person. Much better.
Check in: chapter one, 8,749 words
I need to write 5000 more words by the end of the weekend. Blimey.
Obstacles so far: no time when I start applying for jobs
Felt sick writing on the train (better now)
Bad writing
Kids being really loud and constantly craving my attention when I'm writing. How do writers raise kids and still write?
Oh, remember how I don't follow outlines? During the writing of chapter one, I changed chapter 7-8's outline. Yeah buddy.
J
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amused - Music:Ricky Gervais and Elmo singing New York New York
( Click here to read crappy drafts )
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calm - Music:Darren Hayes's MAKING THE ALBUM
I understand that the first draft is supposed to be bad, but what's the point of finishing something you aren't proud of? I'm not used to this method. I always go for quality over completeness (in writing, not in filmmaking). I'm used to writing a scene many times before being satisfied, but I'll never make 50000 words in a month if I write each scene twice. But I can't just write crap. If the first scene is bad, it's only going to spring bad branches.
I'm not ready to throw in the towel yet, but I'm not too optimistic. NaNoWriMo is for people who have a book in them and never had the chance to write it, not for someone who thought up a plot and characters in one sitting and wants to get something decent out of it.
I'll post the two versions of my first scene when I plug my computer in next.
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Subway Selection Series: Reviews of book I read on the New York subway
| Farenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury 179 pages |
I'm not sure what the point of reading the review of a classic novel is because you already know it's worth reading, but I will attempt to give my thoughts on F451 anyway. It's interesting to note that this is not the government imposing a no reading law. It's the people who have stopped reading. That's like today. Most adults do not read for leisure. We are a changing society who would rather have fun than grow intelligence, but Bradbury argues that underneath, the fun-lovers aren't anymore happy than the readers, and sometimes less happy. I'm going to quote my favorite passage and leave you with that: |
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