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Something Wicked This Way Comes

By Ray Bradbury

215 pages




At some point, I will read something not written by Bradbury, but I read F451, then short stories and part of Now and Forever during NaNoWriMo. Kaleidoscope is my new favorite short. And I wpuld like to read his writers guide soon. But, you see, his style is inspiring, and though I could never hope to achieve anything as great as his prose, I do find I write more poetically when I have been reading his stories.

What's it about?

Something Wicked This Way Comes begins with two boys, Will Halloway and Jim Nightshade, one light, one dark. When a circus train arrives at 3 am, the hour when the soul ebbs, Jim and Will find themselves tangled in a sideshow of freaks. One of the two owners demonstrates the magic carousel. Ride it forward, you age. Backwards, you youthen.

When something in the aging process goes wrong, the other owner, Mr. Dark the illustrated man is out hunting the two boys. Just when they think there is no one in town who will ever believe them, Will's father, the library janitor, turns up, making Will realize how little he ever knew of this man he's live with for 13 years.

Any good?

As always, Bradbury's sentences are magnificent. From the first sentence, "First of all, it was October, a rare month for boys," I knew this would be good.

Bradbury spends the first half of the novel reiterating how opposite the boys are. I kept thinking "Okay, we get it!" But each time he stated it, it was different and more beautiful than the last, so I didn't mind.

The second half was intense and emotional. There were the threats of the freaks, but moreso, the threat toward the kids' parents, which transports the reader back to childhood sobbing.

The book is about two things: aging and father/son relationship. The boys want to be older while the father wants to be younger. The worst blow he gets is when the witch calls him old. Bradbury taps into chilhood expertly, like in many of his stories. I can't remember what it was like to be a kid half as well as he does. It's almost like he lived a more special and longer childhood than anyone else to be able to write about it this well. EDIT: In his writing book, I read that he has what I can only assume is some kind of photographic memory because he remembers being a baby, being born, etc. No wonder he can write children so well. He has a magic brain. I want a magic brain.

It was also great to see that the adults were not Charlie Brown adults. The father is just as human and vulnerable as the children, but he ultimately saves the day, making him a hero in Will's eyes when he'd only been a silent janitor who lived in his house before.

The main villian is the illustrated man, who seems to be a completely different man than the one from Bradbury's "The Illustrated Man." He was a scary fellow, sort of classic scary with the addition of tattoos that worked as voodoo dolls. This is a very classic story, after all. It is good vs evil. Terror against laughter.

To sum, through magnificient prose and edge-of-your seat action and poignant reflections on age, it was a two thumbs up novel.

J

NaNoWriMo Ch. 9 (THE END!)

  • Dec. 1st, 2009 at 8:12 PM
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There you have it, the ninth and final chapter of a nearly 60,000 word novel finished in under 30 days. I admit, were I to revise, the second half of the novel would probably play out differently, but as I was rushed, I stayed with the original outline and so it's a little forced. So sue me. Thanks for joining me this month. Stay tuned for my overall thouhts on NaNoWriMo to come.



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NaNoWriMo Chapter 8

  • Dec. 1st, 2009 at 8:09 PM
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Yeah, I don't really like Pulp either. Dang it. I've never gone this long without a title.




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NaNoWriMo winner!

  • Nov. 29th, 2009 at 7:53 PM
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November 29th at 8:47pm, I have completed my novel at 58,226 words.

What do you think about the title Pulp? Hmm, not really sure. Pulp Fiction is already taken.
Suggestions are welcome.

I'll upload the last 2 chapters next time I'm online. It all comes together rather clumsily, but I was writing so darn fast. Perhaps I will muse on the pros and cons of nanowrimo later.

Thanks for tuning in.

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stories that come from dreams

  • Nov. 28th, 2009 at 10:34 AM
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Who here gets stories from dreams? I frequently do. When I tell this to people, they might think I'm lucky to get inspiration on a silver platter, but what they don't see is all the pages of jotted down dreams I wrote in the dark, thinking in the bleary hours of night that it was a brilliant idea.

For example, I woke up this morning to find I had scribbled a full page of a dream in the notebook beside my bed. I vaguely remember waking up and thinking That's a brilliant idea! But I don't remember the dream at all. Sometimes I get dreams like the one that became the first scene in Riff. Sometimes I get dreams like last night's which apparently contained the following:

"There is a red (illegible) of fish that excretes harmful gasses. Have to evacuate the building each time this happens."

And

"Special bracelet evil forces from the nightmares always tugging at her possess her. One possession gets her to fling off the bracelet."

I smell a Blockbuster, don't you?

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50,000 words!

  • Nov. 26th, 2009 at 10:03 PM
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For NaNoWriMo, I have reached 50,000 words, hazzah! This is nanowrimo.org's goal, but I won't declare myself a winner until the novel is done. I was planning on a 60,000 word novel anyway b/c 50k is darn short.

It's only 11:00, but I'm giving up for the night because I'm writing nonsense and I'm full of turkey and sleep.

Things that I've been doing instead of writing this week:
-Christmas shopping
-Thanksgiving meal
-watching a ton of "Black Books" on YouTube.

J

NaNoWriMo Chapter 7

  • Nov. 26th, 2009 at 5:17 PM
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This is a long chapter. Sorry. Thanks to Nicole who has read and critiqued chapters 1-6! You don't have to keep reading if you don't want to. :D


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NaNoWriMo Chapter 6

  • Nov. 21st, 2009 at 9:06 PM
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2 things that I am trying to improve in my writing by creating this novel: word choice/imagery and cliffhangers. I think the cliffhangers have been keeping up, but the middle of the story is starting to lack a lot in writing style and diction. Boo. But hopefully the story is holding out. I'm getting lazy with dialogue dialects though, so there's some serious accent slippage.

Enjoy.

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NaNoWriMo Chapter 5

  • Nov. 17th, 2009 at 9:34 PM
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No proof-reading again, sorry. I think the story has hit a bit of a lull at this midway point, but it should pick up soon.


Chapter 5

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NaNoWriMo CHAPTER 4

  • Nov. 15th, 2009 at 11:58 AM
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I find that I'm a happier person when I'm in the middle of a big writing project. Maybe it's just because Oactober sucked being sick and everything, but November is a much happier time!

I have succeeded in this week's goal of 28,000 words. I'm in the middle of writing chapter 5. I'll post chpater 4 here, but I warn you, I haven't proof read this one, so there's going to be even more errors than usual.

One of my original ideas was to have a book on Thoreau, but it would take too much research for a month-book, so I decided against it. Sneaky little bugger worked himself back into the story and in no small way! But what better a person to read about in a book like this?

I went to the library to pick up a copy of Walden because I needed some quote and I accidentally found The Count of Monty Cristo. Over 1300 pages!!! That won't do. I'm going to have to pick a different book for the first chapter.

Things are happening spontaneously in this book, as they should. Thoreau, for example. Also, in this chapter, what Tian finds in the bins in Basil's house is something that I discovered literally as I was putting the words on the page. Who needs outlines, really? And yes, Basil has a pet rat. It's not a Fawlty Towers reference, although it's probably subconscious.



CHAPTER 4



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NaNoWriMo CHAPTER 3

  • Nov. 13th, 2009 at 3:38 PM
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Moving right along, here's chapter three. Things are out of control, the outline bending and swooshing at its own free will! But enjoy.





CHAPTER 3


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check in 2

  • Nov. 8th, 2009 at 7:30 PM
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NaNoWriMo check in.

End of week 1
Goal: 14000 words
Actual: 14985
2 chapters complete
Whoo!

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NaNoWriMo CHAPTER 1, part 2

  • Nov. 7th, 2009 at 9:18 PM
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Here's my NaNoWriMo Chapter One, part 2.





 

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NaNoWriMo CHAPTER ONE, Part 1

  • Nov. 7th, 2009 at 9:16 PM
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Here it is. Chapter One of my NaNoWriMo novel. Live Journal is telling me my post is too large, so I will cut it into pieces for you. Cut me some slack. Do you know how fast I'm writing? But if you have suggestions or criticism, please share! Novel title suggestions are appreciated too.




 

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check in 1

  • Nov. 6th, 2009 at 8:37 PM
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Whew. It's 9:30 pm Friday and I finished chapter 1 of my NaNoWriMo book. Working title is Luddites, but I don't like it as a final title. Will take suggestions if you read some of it. I'll post chapter one soon.

So why did the first drafts suck? I'm going to call it If You're Copying Bradbury's Style (pathetically, may I add) Then Write In 3rd Person. Much better.

Check in: chapter one, 8,749 words

I need to write 5000 more words by the end of the weekend. Blimey.

Obstacles so far: no time when I start applying for jobs
Felt sick writing on the train (better now)
Bad writing
Kids being really loud and constantly craving my attention when I'm writing. How do writers raise kids and still write?

Oh, remember how I don't follow outlines? During the writing of chapter one, I changed chapter 7-8's outline. Yeah buddy.

J

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Read my Crap Drafts

  • Nov. 6th, 2009 at 11:57 AM
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Okay, I've calmed down a little. It's not a complete disaster. I'm going to post the full chapter one at the end of the weekend when it's done. In the meantime, do you want to see what crap looks like? Here are the first two drafts of the first scene. They're really bad. I don't even want to show you, but I promised to be honest about the writing process on this writing blog and not make it look like I can make good stuff happen out of nowhere.


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I can't make a good tree from a bad seed

  • Nov. 2nd, 2009 at 8:48 PM
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NaNoWriMo is starting off on shakey ground. First, I'm sick and it's no fun writing with a stuffy head. Then writing on the subway is proving difficult because I'm not a morning writer and all three times I wrote on the subway, I've gotten a stomach ache. Motion sickness? Lastly, what I have written is terrible.

I understand that the first draft is supposed to be bad, but what's the point of finishing something you aren't proud of? I'm not used to this method. I always go for quality over completeness (in writing, not in filmmaking). I'm used to writing a scene many times before being satisfied, but I'll never make 50000 words in a month if I write each scene twice. But I can't just write crap. If the first scene is bad, it's only going to spring bad branches.

I'm not ready to throw in the towel yet, but I'm not too optimistic. NaNoWriMo is for people who have a book in them and never had the chance to write it, not for someone who thought up a plot and characters in one sitting and wants to get something decent out of it.

I'll post the two versions of my first scene when I plug my computer in next.

Book Review: Fahrenheit 451

  • Oct. 27th, 2009 at 7:59 PM
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Subway Selection Series: Reviews of book I read on the New York subway

Farenheit 451

by Ray Bradbury

179 pages


I'm not sure what the point of reading the review of a classic novel is because you already know it's worth reading, but I will attempt to give my thoughts on F451 anyway.

I decided to stop by the library and pick up this small book this week because November is coming up and I wanted to make sure I knew this book well before writing my own novel about a society without books. Mostly because I didn't want to accidentally copy it. But also because it's nice to have Bradbury's style in mind when writing. Writers are usually influenced stylistically by what they're currently reading.

I hadn't actually read this book before. I'm a big fan of Bradbury, but this is the first full-length novel I've read of his. I have seen the F451 movie a couple times, though, and took it to be fairly accurate. It is actually a good movie and I recommend it, but it's not exactly the same as the book. One thing is that you're missing out on all of Bradbury's beautiful language. If only one living writer has any talent stylistically, it has to be Bradbury. Sensory detail, unique diction, perfect analogies--these are his strengths. Not that he is lacking in meaning, plot, or character. In fact, part of what is missing in the movie is some of the vivid characters. I think they're coming out with another movie in 2012 (Bradbury says something to this effect in the interview at the end of the book). I can't imagine it's going to be half as good as the first movie even if they do include the mechanical hound.


What's the book about?

Guy Montag is a fireman in the futuristic world where books are outlawed for making people think too much. Firemen go around to homes where books are said to hide and torch the place down, sometimes including the people that live there. Guy is quite content with his life until they burn an old woman to death. Then he starts to see the small collection of books he's stolen over the years in a different light. He actually starts to READ them.

This leads to thinking, a sudden waking up to the truth that he's not happy. The only person who could understand him, the neighbor girl, is killed in a car accident. His wife is a mindless consumer of their three-wall-TV. His co-workers are against him. Finally, he turns to an old man he met in the part, Faber, who he suspects is a reader too.

When Montag finally rebels, torching his home, his fire captain, his co-workers, he takes to the river in desperate attempt to flee the scene before the firemen set out the mechanical hound--a robot dog with a perfect sense of smell, eight legs, and a needle of poison.


How is it?

While reading on the subway, I haven't been as engrossed in a book as with this one. The words themselves, as I said, are enough to make any writer squirm because they are too much the right words. How does he do it?

Reading Bradbury feels comfortable in a way that is unlike reading any other author. It's familiar in the way that a new friend who you feel you've known your whole life is familiar.

But also, the story says something. I'm not going to go deep into its meaning, the need of books, the frivolous society because you can read that for yourself on sparknotes. It's interesting to see how our culture has come so near this reality fifty years later. Reading is still seen as a good thing, but people are so captivated by nonsense in the media, there literally are people like Montag's wife Mildred in the world. They suck in jabber from the lowest forms of entertainment and put nothing back into the world. I think the best bit is in the end when Montag is visualizing the death of his wife before the bomb hits the city. Staring into the TV wall, the TV goes dark and for the first time, she sees her own reflection and recognizes herself for what she is. And screams into death.

It's interesting to note that this is not the government imposing a no reading law. It's the people who have stopped reading. That's like today. Most adults do not read for leisure. We are a changing society who would rather have fun than grow intelligence, but Bradbury argues that underneath, the fun-lovers aren't anymore happy than the readers, and sometimes less happy.

I'm going to quote my favorite passage and leave you with that:

"Everyone must leave something behind when he dies. A child or a book or a painting or a house or a wall built or a pair of shoes made. Or a garden planted. Something your hand touched some way so your soul has somewhere to go when you die, and when people look at that tree or that flower that you planted, you're there. It doesn't matter what you do, so long as you change something from the way it was before you touched it into something that's like you after you take your hands away. The difference between the man who just cuts lawns and a real gardener is the touching. The lawn cutter just as well not have been there at all; the gardener will be there a lifetime."

NaNoWriMo second thoughts

  • Oct. 25th, 2009 at 6:33 PM
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I don't know why I didn't realize it before, but November is the month I planned to start looking for jobs again. This doesn't make NaNoWriMo unfeasible if I write the book on the subway (I think Robert Olen Butler used to write on trains) but it might make posting all the chapters in November unrealistic b/c that would mean typing them all up. That puts a crimp on keeping track of word count. We'll see how it goes. I wasn't planning on job hunting 'til after my birthday midmonth anyway.

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